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Late

Daddy, you forgot something

"What?!" Thomas says sprinting in
" no-oh-oh-oh" my yells turn into cries.
"Oh…OH MY… DOCTOR! DOCTOR COME QUICK!" He screams
"what? What? What?" The doctor says bursting through the door " Holy shit!" She screams running towards him.
"No! No-oh-oh*cry*" I scream "Help him!" I yell wile falling to the ground "don't *deep breath* don't let *cough* don't let him die!"
" Boy, go get me the needle in the lab. It's in the basket that says EMRG63" the doctor says to Thomas
"ok" he says running out.

Here i lay, on the floor curled up in a ball hyperventilating and choking on my tears while my father has a knife —the same one Thomas had earlier— half-way into his throat.

Thomas comes running in with a needle in his hand. The doctor grabs it from him and shoves it in fathers neck, right were the wound is. Thomas gags at the sight and I start to ball.
"No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No…" I whisper over and over to myself. I block off the rest of the noise and just think to myself. "now I know why he did it. He wanted me gone so he can commit suicide. Why would he just leave me here? To raise myself? I have no were else to go. I can't be taken in by other families. They will never take the risk into letting me into their home. Were will I go?… did he do this on purpose? Did he just leave me so that I can die?… but… no he loves me! Daddy would never leave me. Look! Look! Look at my hands! They have the blood of daddy! It's his! He put it here! So I can become him! And die too! Listen! Listen! Listen to the sounds of the fire crackling in hell! Feel the warm heat of the devil!…no…no back away! It burns! It burns! I can't stay here any longer! Take me! Take me with you daddy! I love your too!… I see now that life is stupid! It's a joke! It's like a messed up game! It's,it's a rigged game! You play it and you end up loosing in the end! No one! No one can get out of it! Once you play, you stay! Come on and join the fun! We all have the same outcome but maybe you will be the lucky winner! Daddy! Daddy! Daddy come back! I have something for you! It's my love! You forgot it here! Come back! Come back and get it from me! I don't need your love any more! A father would never leave his precious diamond behind! I shine bright! I blinded you daddy! You can't see me! You can't get me! You can't get me! Come find my heart! You will never find it again! Looks like you lost it daddy!"
"Lucy!" Thomas yells but it sounds like a soft whisper "Lucy!" He calls again but I just lay there and ignore it. "Oh father! Oh father! Oh father you shall die! We all do any way! Oh father! Father, father, father! You lady me here alone!…all alone…"
all of a sudden a hard slap wakes me up from my long think.
"Lucy!" Thomas yells in my face.
I sit up
"what?!"
the doctor walks over to me and says, there was nothing that we could do.

Notes

So if you were wondering about the weird things that Lucy was saying, we'll lets start with this. She was thinking to her self a went crazy. But Thomas's slap snapped her out of it. What do you think will happen next? Comment!!!!!!!

Comments

Hi

haleystyles haleystyles
5/2/14

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG JUST A FEW MORE CHAPTER TILL DA END!!!!!

Waving_Snail Waving_Snail
5/2/14

Hey y'all! There will be a "PART 3" and maybe even a "PART 4" or "PART 5"! So be ready!!!!!!

Waving_Snail Waving_Snail
4/27/14

@southern cutie
Thanks!

Waving_Snail Waving_Snail
3/23/14

Hiiiiiiii, I really love this story! The line that talked about eleamors death bed was really dramatic! I can't get over that! Keep updating PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!)?

southern cutie southern cutie
3/23/14