
FANFIC MACHINE
The Fire In His Eyes
Honestly, I loved your story. You should change a thing. As Leroy would say, it was "Per-Fect."
I didnt see a grammical error at all. Your extremely talented and well, you need to finish this story. ;)
-M
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If this was a disappointment to read, please remember you asked ME to review your story. Don't bitch or anything like that because it's my opinion.
I didnt see a grammical error at all. Your extremely talented and well, you need to finish this story. ;)
-M
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If this was a disappointment to read, please remember you asked ME to review your story. Don't bitch or anything like that because it's my opinion.
Hi! Could you please review my story Setting Up 1D? If you have the time? :)
5/27/14