Society Well I really liked your story. I only found one error with grammar and I hope you continue to write. Though... I didn't really like how you made it into a dream at first, it really suited the story.

I WILL continue reading your story. Keep up the good work! ;) -M

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If this was a disappointment to read, please remember you asked ME to review your story. Don't bitch or anything like that because it's my opinion.