Well, at the beginning of your story it was boring, but as I dug deeper into it I found that it was much more. Catlin (I make have spelt her name wrong.) and her abusive ex, rape, birthday? I thought that it was gonna be like every other fanfic out there but it wasn't. Your story made my day. I saw some grammical errors though. Other than that, it was outstanding.

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If this was a disappointment to read, please remember you asked ME to review it so don't bitch or anything like that, it's my opinion.