rate: 9.5
idea: +
grammar: good

I read the first eight chapters and it's very interesting to me! I have to say I'm not really into the whole supernatural thing but you've done a great job (from what I've read). There were a few grammatical spelling errors but it was overall okay. The only big thing that bothered me was that Louis is spelled with and 's' at the end. Other than that I think it's great. I feel that it was rushed a bit--the first couple of chapters she's freaked out and then the next they are already kissing and he says he likes her.

I am enjoying your story so far and it seems everyone else is too!

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