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midnight memories
Rating: 3
This took 5 minutes to read! Only 3 chapters.
Capitalization and grammar.
Also, it was really rushed! First he breaks up and take a walk, bumps into a girl gives his number to her by slipping it in her purse. Then it goes to her view. She takes out the number not knowing who's it was. Calls it and asks for help, someone is following her. She gets punched and who she calls yells get away from her. He takes her home and she awakes. They awake Niall by saying food. There is your whole story summary right there...
It wasn't original.. at all...
Here is a link to the story:
(Recommended if you like rushed stuff.) 5 minutes to read, that's it!)
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/25373/midnight-memories/
Notes
I didn't care my self for it at all.~ThrRockerOfTheParty
P.S. If your story has a rating 7 or higher, I will subscribe to it!
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
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6/16/15