STORY PERSON
Coming Home - bookworm366
Here is my review:
1: I absolutley LOOOOOVE your story. (just had to get that out of the way)
2: I like that you know when to switch POVS so the reader doesn't become so confused!
3:You do this great thing of separating dialogue from the rest, but there is some parts where it isn't separated....its not that big of a deal but that's the only thing that could possibly make it better!
4: Finally, i am going crazy for another update so plz update soon i am all subscribed and set for more!!!
1: I absolutley LOOOOOVE your story. (just had to get that out of the way)
2: I like that you know when to switch POVS so the reader doesn't become so confused!
3:You do this great thing of separating dialogue from the rest, but there is some parts where it isn't separated....its not that big of a deal but that's the only thing that could possibly make it better!
4: Finally, i am going crazy for another update so plz update soon i am all subscribed and set for more!!!
Notes
I luv u guys :)-Sofi<3
P.S. i love reading antics so why not do something good while doing it and review it for people!!
soooo keep em coming!!!!
12/23/13