STORY PERSON
Becoming Harry Styles - Jen Storm
Hey so this is my review:
1: I REALLY love your story ( i just wanted to start off with that)
2: I like how you paraphrase it into paragraphs. They are a decent size, with about 3 or 4 good sentences each.
3: One thing that some readers might be curious about is the variety in POVS. Up until this moment, there is only Marcel's POV and for me, it would be more interesting to see the POV of Riley and how she deals with Kyle.
4: You have a great structure to your writing. You know when to start a new paragraph and you have a VERY interesting plot line.
GREAT JOB!!!!!!
1: I REALLY love your story ( i just wanted to start off with that)
2: I like how you paraphrase it into paragraphs. They are a decent size, with about 3 or 4 good sentences each.
3: One thing that some readers might be curious about is the variety in POVS. Up until this moment, there is only Marcel's POV and for me, it would be more interesting to see the POV of Riley and how she deals with Kyle.
4: You have a great structure to your writing. You know when to start a new paragraph and you have a VERY interesting plot line.
GREAT JOB!!!!!!
Notes
Thanks for everyone who comments their stories!I will do them as soon as possible!
-Sofi<3
12/23/13