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Story REVEIWS!!!!!

Keep Holding on

Link to book -----> http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22533/Keep-Holding-On/
Author ----- > loverbugger13


~ rate 8
~ Theway you space things like when you go switch to a diffrent pov Do a couple lines down then start ex:

Blah Blah

ZaynPOV
...... blah blah
~How you word things are good could be better though
~ Your storys good.. i think its a good plot .... With the Secrets
~ I dont know .. yet
~Ill share your story around
~ If you need ideas im here to help

Notes

I hope that some what helps XD

Comments

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !

Perla1D Perla1D
7/4/14

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Could you review my story called Brokin Glas Dulz, please?

Can you please review Affection?

Hazza_xxo Hazza_xxo
1/18/14
Could you do mine? Its a Louis Fic called Rewrite This Story. My friend tells me its good but no on eseems to be reading it or subscribing... :( I just wanted and unbiased opinion
emmaphants emmaphants
11/7/13