Link ----> http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22716/Wait-For-You/
Author -----> Niall'sFUTUREwife


Rate out of 1-10 ..... 8 ( mostly because your not that far .. not saying its a bad thing jjust not into it yet)

Good things: its a very good story line .. with the cancer and the protective dad

Bad things just some grammer not that bad

cereal was all of the way at the very end of the aisle
cereal was all the way at the very end of the aisle
The doctors tell me i’m
The doctors tell me I’m

Will I keep reading : Yes i will. i think it will be interesting to see how it plays out

I will be sharing it around

Hope that helps
and try to had a summary about the story it might help you get more readings.
Also try to had a chapter everyday/every other day just to keep the readers interested ... because people like me if you wait to long to upload ill stop reading

Notes

I hope that helped