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The Wanted Girl

Chapter Sixty-Five

Brielle's POV:
It was official, I was never leaving Bermuda. And I was going to keep Harry hostage with me. The paparazzi had kind of followed us here but that was alright. There was only about five or six of them, and by the time we got back to the hotel from the beach, I had kind of warmed up to them. They were polite, asked if they could take a few pictures at each spot and promised they'd give us alone time after that. So of course, we agreed. They had gotten maybe seven shots and I knew that once we got it over with, we would all go back to enjoying our vacations. I understood that this was their job and Harry's relationships were a big deal. So the fact that it was only a couple of guys and they were kind enough to give us our space, I was happy with it.

Harry laid down on the bed next to me and nuzzled into my neck, "I love it here."

I smiled, "Me too. Can't we stay longer?"

"I wish. We still have two days left though. So let's just enjoy it," He pleaded.

My phone began buzzing and I looked to see Sophie's name on my screen. As I grabbed it and showed Harry who is was, he nodded and left the room, to give us 'privacy'.

"Hi babes," I said.

"Ughhhh," She moaned.

I giggled, "Rough day with your boys home?"

She laughed, "This is a fucking mess, Bri."

"What happened? Fist fight? Declaration of love? Tell me more!"

"They're making me chose and swooning me. I have to decide by the time they leave in two days," She whined.

"But you're like dating Zayn. What's the issue?" I asked.

"You're absolutely fucking right. There shouldn't be an issue. But there is! I have a cloud the size of that massive engagement ring hanging over my head. It's like Louis' scarred me so I can't TRULY be happy with anyone else," she explained.

I snorted, "Well it sounds like no matter who you're with, you'll be happy. So flip a coin and move on."

"I can't fucking flip a coin, Brielle. I need ADVICE. Advice from YOU. Come on, PLEASE!" She begged.

I laughed, "Okay okay. Look for the signs. There's bound to be a sign that one of them isn't the right one. Look for those. Look for the things that they can't give you and decide which works best for you and them."

She scoffed, "So leave it up to fate?"

"Mhmmm," I breathed.

"I don't believe in fate!" She snapped.

I laughed even harder, "Oh my GOD Sophie then I don't know what to say! I'm not choosing for you. You know I love you with either of them. Namely Zayn. But this isn't about me! This is your issue. You're pretty much choosing your future and you're worried about what's best for everyone else!"

"No I'm not! When did I say that?!" She shrieked.

"Sophie, you didn't have to. I'm your bestfriend and I know your thought process."

"I have to go. Louis' here," She mumbled.

"Have fun!" I squealed.

I hungup and walked into the kitchenette to finish making Harry lunch. Even on vacation and tour, I cooked for him and the boys. Back in Boston, I would cook for the entire team. I'm a feeder. It makes me feel better and he loves it. I topped off the chicken and placed it into the salad bowl over top of the lettuce.

I felt strong arms wrap around me and smiled, "Mmm babe that smells delicious."

"Yeah well sit down and I'll bring it to you," I said.

He sat at the counter and rubbed his hands together when I set it in front of him. I leaned back on the counter as I watched him dive into his food, only letting out moans of delight and shoveling more in the second he had room in his mouth.

"Babe this is so good. Better then my mums even," He declared.

"Don't you dare repeat that Harry. I want her to like me, alright? Last thing she needs is to think you don't miss her cooking," I narrowed my eyes at him and he smiled.

"I love my mum and her cooking but yours is killer too," He chattered.

I nodded and put the rest of the food in the empty containers before setting them in the refrigerator.

"You made way too much you know. We're only going to be here like two more days," He said.

I rolled my eyes, "You stick to singing and I'll stick to cooking."

He threw his hands up in protest and went back to eating.

"So, what'd Sophie need?" He pressed.

"Oh she's just having boy problems, as per usual," I explained.

"Again?"

I nodded, "Zayn and Louis pretty much told her she has to choose and the other person isn't an option after that. They're making her decide by the time they leave."

His eyes went wide, "Wow. Well what's she thinking?"

I shrugged, "Probably Zayn. She's so done with Louis. No matter what he says or how great he's been lately, it's probably too late."

That was my opinion. Zayn was the better option. Louis' screwed up five too many times and Sophia needed a constant. She needed unconditional love and I wasn't not sure that Louis was capable of that.

He rolled his eyes, "She'll make the right decision. And that would mean Louis."

I pointed the knife at him. Not in a threatening way, but more of an extension to my arm, "Don't get involved Haz."

His mouth dropped open, "But you did!"

"No I didn't. Sophia asked me for advice. I was unbiased and led her to figuring out HER feelings. Not mine."

He rolled his eyes, "Fine."

Sophia's POV:
I walked into the strange place, holding Louis' hand as he guided me through the large warehouse.

"Where the hell are we?" I asked.

He smiled, "We're almost there, I promise."

We turned a corner and pretty much walked into an entirely new world. There were beautiful tropical trees everywhere, a small bridge crossing a manmade river, and even a waterfall. I stood there, stunned, until he pulled me through the 'forrest' and over the little bridge to a cute little blanket and a picnic basket.

"What is this place?" I asked in astonishment.

I sat on the blanket and looked around the area. We were in a wearhouse of course, but it sure as hell felt as if we were in Narnia.

"It's just something a threw together," He waved his hands dismissively.

I snorted as he poured champagne into my glass.

"It's gorgeous," I praised.

He smiled. Like REALLY smiled.

"You like it?" He asked in disbelief.

I laughed, "Of course I do, Lou! This is really cool."

He held his glass up to mine and I smiled, "To…"

He finished for me, "To you."

I felt my cheeks get red and I looked over my shoulder in an attempt to hide it. I looked around and began to feel uncomfortable. An amazing date, a great guy, tons of girls would kill for this. All of the effort he put into it. But what were we doing here? Pretending everything was normal when it wasn't.

"Soph…" He began.

I sighed, "Yeah Lou?"

"Tell me what you're thinking." He pressed.

"I don't know. This date. It's amazing, don't get me wrong. But for some reason it feels… forced." I explained.

He nodded and looked down at the glass of champagne in his hand, mind wandering.

"I don't want you to think I don't appreciate it.. It's just-"

He smiled, "You wish it was Zayn here, not me."

"No!" I exclaimed.

"It's not that at all. I just… Look around Lou. This isn't 'us'. This is extravagant and amazing. Our first date was doing shots at 3pm in a shit bar in Belfast." I smiled at the memory of the date gone wrong.

"Well this is how it's supposed to be Soph. I'm SUPPOSED to do things like this for you. That date was a mess!" He laughed.

I shook my head, smiling, "That date was perfect. That date was US. This," I motioned around to the gorgeous man made garden, "is wonderful. But not us."

He grinned and stood up, reaching his hand out to mine. He pulled me onto my feet and dragged me out to his car.

"Lou!" I laughed.

"Where are we going?!"

He laughed, "Just get in the car, woman. We're doing something 'us.'"

Notes

Everyone, pleasee read this story. I love it so much. The author is so so so talented and the story line is perfection. It's unlike any other fanfic out there and keeps you on your toes. It's my favorite story on this website and it drives me crazy that not too many people know about it.

Here's a baby update for you guys. I'm going to update again tomorrow.

love you guys to the moon and back! Please comment and tell me what you think is going to happen next!

Is Harry going to stay out of it?
Is Brielle going to stay out of it?
Who is Sophia going to chose?
WHO ARE WE SHIPPING?! Louphia vs Zophia.

We're almost at the end :((((

Comments

Update!!!

SeReNiTySOSA SeReNiTySOSA
3/17/15

@RealityRuinedMyLifeBCKUP
I just realized I said the same thing as everyone else but yea. I guess that's the main idea that's being thrown around here.

@RealityRuinedMyLifeBCKUP
I was wondering why you haven't updated in a while. But it really sucks that you've lost your account. I think the best option here is to just maybe rewrite the story on your new account. Or just continue it without rewriting, like a sequel.

@RealityRuinedMyLifeBCKUP

Awwww Elle!! That's awful that happened! I've been missing your story too! I think @HeyItsGabi has a good idea. Start the sequel in the new account and refer back because you were doing a sequel anyhow. Then I don't have to be deprived anymore (and as we all know it's all about me anyhow lol). So glad you are back!!!

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/9/14

I say you should start a new story and say it is the sequel then just put the link to the first seventy seven chapters in the description.

HeyItsGabi HeyItsGabi
7/8/14