Title: Revenge On Eleanor Calder
Author: Sameria Stylinson

My rating for your story: ~8~

What you could do to make it better:
To make your book look more "Professional", you can talk more about how the characters feel, or describe what they feel by using more descriptive words when they talk. Like, instead of saying "Louis said," you can say "Louis yells" or something like that so it shows how he is feeling in his words. You can also talk about their actions, and how they do their actions. (Ex, he sloppily threw his cereal bowl in the sink.) Otherwise, your book is FABULOUIS! (:

Whats FABULOUIS about your book:
Well, for starters, your book is on the popular page, and there is a reason for that. Your Book is really good! The plot twist is intense, and I was also already subscribed to your book before you commented it (:

Notes

Okay, still nobody is commenting the links. It's a different story if you actually CAN'T, then tell me and I'll rate yours like how I rate the others. But I am NOT tasting any without a link, unless you tell me you can't add the link. THEN I will review it.

Thanks for commenting the links people! (:

ALSO:

READ. HER. BOOK.

Its really good (: Like, really good. So it now if your looking rfo other good books to read(:

Well, I Love every single one of you commenters! Even the people who don't put the link. (:

~Kay ( :