Title: Twinsies
Author: Niall_Is_Damn_Sexy

What I rate your story: ~9~

What you could do to make it better:
Add the other characters POV. (Point Of Views) Instead of it just being Maycee's POV, you can add other POV so readers have a good idea about how the other characters feel. You can also add stronger description about how the characters act, but you are pretty good at the so it's not a problem. Another thing is you can show what roles the characters play at school, (popular, losers, etc.) Btw, Macy and Olivia are twins, right?

What is PHENOMINIALL about your book:
Well, I Love Niall also. He is like, one of my favorites. (Even though I Love them all the same.) I also like how you describe what the characters look like, and how you add the outfits into the story. I Love the part when they bend over and everyone stares at her. That was Hilarious! xD I also like how you added a wannabe slur and they call her Bitchany. That was priceless.

Btw, you should update. I subscribed and rated ^.^ SO KEEP THE CGAPTERS COMING!

Notes

If anyone reads this, GO AND CHECK OUT HER STORY! It's very good so far. But with you views + shit, it will be even more AMAZAYN. The link is up above in the beginning ^

Well, if anyone wants me to review their book, you guys HAVE to put the link. Or else no vote for you. It shows me you actually took the time to add it, and how much you ant it viewed. If you don't, it shows me your a lazy add like me. Haha

(Dont give me hate on that. I was kidding.) ^^

But yeah (:

COMMENT THE LINK!

Love you guys(:

~Kay