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Dare To Love
Title: Dare To Love
Author: Miracle_Monet
My rating for your story: ~8.5~
What you could do to make it better:
Update! The more you update, the more it shows up on the updated page, which means the more views and votes and subscribers you will get! Which, (If you have enough,) your book may be on the popular page! Also, you could put more detail about what the characters look like, so people have a visual picture of the character. Another big is you can add more description on how the people feel, use big words like instead of run, use dash. Or instead of the word cry, use sobbed. Just little things like that make a book more descriptive, so the reader knows how the character feels. You could also switch the POV sometimes to Hannah so people Kniw how she is too.
What is EXTRAORDINHARRY about your book:
Well, what's funny is that my last name is Palmer, like Carmens maiden name. So I thought that was awesome. Your chapters are perfect length wise, because I love long chapters! I also like how Hanna is easygoing, and how Carmens stressed like 24/7. I thought that was a good plot twist among the characters. Another good things is how you switched it to Harry's POV, so readers have a feel about what's going on with him.
All in all, your book was really good! Just update more frequently so the readers don't get tired of waiting and then stop reading. Update at least every 4 days at the latest. Well, I hope my advice helps you with your story! Thanks fir commenting! (:
Author: Miracle_Monet
My rating for your story: ~8.5~
What you could do to make it better:
Update! The more you update, the more it shows up on the updated page, which means the more views and votes and subscribers you will get! Which, (If you have enough,) your book may be on the popular page! Also, you could put more detail about what the characters look like, so people have a visual picture of the character. Another big is you can add more description on how the people feel, use big words like instead of run, use dash. Or instead of the word cry, use sobbed. Just little things like that make a book more descriptive, so the reader knows how the character feels. You could also switch the POV sometimes to Hannah so people Kniw how she is too.
What is EXTRAORDINHARRY about your book:
Well, what's funny is that my last name is Palmer, like Carmens maiden name. So I thought that was awesome. Your chapters are perfect length wise, because I love long chapters! I also like how Hanna is easygoing, and how Carmens stressed like 24/7. I thought that was a good plot twist among the characters. Another good things is how you switched it to Harry's POV, so readers have a feel about what's going on with him.
All in all, your book was really good! Just update more frequently so the readers don't get tired of waiting and then stop reading. Update at least every 4 days at the latest. Well, I hope my advice helps you with your story! Thanks fir commenting! (:
Notes
You guys really don't get the point of "Tag your fucking story" do you? I literally got 10 comments saying read my story... but she was seriously the only one that actually put the link. That's why It took me so long to update. So now I changed the rules. If you don't add the link in your comment, your story isn't getting rated. So Yeah.Sooo, you guys should go read Dare To Love by Miracle_Monet! It's very good, but with your guys help, her book with rack up more views!
Link to her book in chapter above ^^
Well, comment the link to your story! I will FOR SURE RATE it if there is a link. Like, for sure.
Okay, well I'm a go. I live you guys! (:
~Kay xx
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