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Takeover
Title: Takeover
Author: One_Direction_Stole_My_Heart_
My rating for your story: ~9~
What you could do to make it better:
Eh. This one is always hard for me. Well for starters, I don't think it is 10 materials because it's a little confusing at times. Not by what you put in the story, but about the point of views and stuff. I think you should pick a2 characters you do all the POVS about, then only do the others every once in a while. Another thing you could do is FUCKING UPDATE . (Sorry, I just really want you to update. lol.) But you should update a lot more so it gets on the updated page a lot so more people will click on it and read and love it. (People Like me.) I also like how you make long chapters, but every once in a while do a small one. Just because you don't want to overwhelmed someone with as good as a story as yours (;
What's EXTRAORDINHARRY about it:
I absolutely love your plot twist. It's like in the beginning it's completely intense, and right now it is completely intense! (I especially love how you made Audrey be with Harry. That was awesome.) I also love how you make your chapters long, so people are satisfied with what they read. There is almost no grammar errors, and that's what make people like what they read. I think your book should honestly be on the popular page.
(If it doesn't, I'll sue OneDirectionfanfiction.org) Jk (;
Author: One_Direction_Stole_My_Heart_
My rating for your story: ~9~
What you could do to make it better:
Eh. This one is always hard for me. Well for starters, I don't think it is 10 materials because it's a little confusing at times. Not by what you put in the story, but about the point of views and stuff. I think you should pick a2 characters you do all the POVS about, then only do the others every once in a while. Another thing you could do is FUCKING UPDATE . (Sorry, I just really want you to update. lol.) But you should update a lot more so it gets on the updated page a lot so more people will click on it and read and love it. (People Like me.) I also like how you make long chapters, but every once in a while do a small one. Just because you don't want to overwhelmed someone with as good as a story as yours (;
What's EXTRAORDINHARRY about it:
I absolutely love your plot twist. It's like in the beginning it's completely intense, and right now it is completely intense! (I especially love how you made Audrey be with Harry. That was awesome.) I also love how you make your chapters long, so people are satisfied with what they read. There is almost no grammar errors, and that's what make people like what they read. I think your book should honestly be on the popular page.
(If it doesn't, I'll sue OneDirectionfanfiction.org) Jk (;
Notes
Alright If you people are looking for a book that's SUPER fucking interesting. Read her book. It's flipping amazayn.Ill love you forever. Haha. But yeah. I will.
Also, COMMENT THE TITLE OF YOUR BOOK! (Link the URL with it please.)
Heres some important info: PLZ link your book on the comment. It makes my life so much easier. I rate those people first if you couldn't tell. I only rate the others if I have time which I haven't SO far. But I Go all the way back down to the first comments. So if you want your book rated, link the fucking URL.
Love you guys. Sorry about my meanness, I just feel bad when I don't RATE a book, but I don't because they didn't try to get me interested in it. Sorry lovelies.
If you want to make me happier,
COMMENT.
RATE LIKE CRAZY.
AND SUBSCRIBE .
Could you please review and rate The mentally brave please?
thanks =)
1/23/14