Title : Becoming Harry Styles
Author : Jen Storm

My rating for you story : ~10 ~

What you could do to make it better :
Shit. Its already perfect. Haha.

Whats phenominiall about it :
There are seriously rarely any spelling errors.
Your formatting is disordered and everything flows together nicely.
Its awesome how you thoroughly describe how they feel. It makes me know and understand more about the characters.
Then there's your punctuation. It's literally flawless.
Your book is like perfect, and I bet it makes it to the popular page. Just saying.

Good luck! I know you will succeed !(:

~Deborah xx

Notes

Ok, I basically read the comments with links. If you put the link with your comment to your story, I'll vote it for sure.

But If you don't add the link, you might not get a review. I might, but it will only be on my free time. But the people with links, are more determined for a review, so I'll review them first.

Just wanted to tell us guys that . So Yeah. Oh and:

Happy Halloween Guys (:

Heres a Pictures That Youll Love.