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Let Go

Chapter 37- Nightmares And A Different Person

December 23

*Louise’s POV*

An ear piercing scream woke me from my deep slumber. I spot out of bed and sprinted to CeCe’s. I looked at the young girl and could not help but feel pity. She had a thin layer of sweat covering her body, her hands were pulling at her hair and her knees were to her chest. A waterfall was falling from her eyes and she was shakeing worst than an earth quake. I hurry over to her and warped her into a warm embrace. "I just can't stop seeing them!" She sobbed into my neck. "Im sorry." I told her as tears started to fall down my face. Knowing that I could not take away this pain that my baby girl was felling, broke my heart.

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A few hours latter Liam and I we standing in the kitchen as he fried some bacon. "Her dreams are getting worse, arnt they." He asked quickly. "You heard?" I asked as I stared at the back of his head. "Lou, I was sleeping in my flat, wich is three floors down and I could hear it." He said in a sad voice. "I just don't know what to do Li! Ever since Harry broke up with her, they have been getting worse. They are getting more vived and happing multiple times a night, she's barely sleeping now.” I told him as I put my head in my hands. "Mabye she needs to go to a doctor in mean if...Good morning Cecilia." His said abruptly ending his thought. I turned to look for my beautiful daughter but saw an entirely different person. Her usaly silky hair was knotted and tangled, her usual bright eyes were dull with bags under them, and her tan skin was now pail.

"Hey baby." I said to her as I put on a fake smile. “Hey.” she replied sleepily as she poured herself a cup of coffee. “I have practice soon so im going to drink my coffee and then go.” She told me placeing her head on my shoulder as she sat next to me. “You need to eat.” Liam told her as he placed a protein bar in front of her. “Im not hungery.” He doled him as she pushed it away. “You need to eat love. You dident eat dinner last night and you barely touched your lunch yesterday. This is really unhealth, you need to eat.” I butted in. “fine.” She snapped back at me as she pulled open the wrapper and stuck it in her mouth. I was taken aback, she has never snapped at me. Im worried about her, I really am.

Notes

Sorry it’s a short chapter I only asked to this question- Do you want me to make a sequel or start a new story? I hate to say it put this story is coming to a close. I have one final Twist I can put at the very end as a cleft hanger I you have one of two choices. 1.Have the cleft hanger and then make a sequel. OR 2. Use the idea for the cleft hanger as the plot for the next story.
If I the majority vote is 2 then I will hold a vote to see what boy will star in the next book. So you guys will get a big say in the next book, if that is what the majority chooses. Please leave in the comments which choice you would like. (p.s. the plot twist/ idea for the book is not the one that I share in chapter 28, that idea when to the trash)

Comments

Your a really good writer and i'm not one to criticize but its LSA not LST it's london school of the arts there is no such thing is london school of talent

Dbug100 Dbug100
11/16/14
I really like the one your starting to wright
Harryismyidol Harryismyidol
9/6/13
I can't find Hold On:(
erincaldwell22 erincaldwell22
4/18/13
you repeated the first part of this chapter in the middle if you didnt know.