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TEMPTATION

CHAPTER 8: "Hi Love I'm Marcel"

Catalina’s P.O.V
After Harry left I went down stairs to find some food from the refrigerator. I was happy now, I finally found somebody who’s obviously not in a rush to have sex and oh my gosh! He is beyond beautiful and that smile that breaks loose his dimples. I shook my head smiling at the thought of those lips being on mine – Does this mean he’s my boyfriend? And I’m his girlfriend? Wait I thought he has a girlfriend? – Suddenly my smile slipped into hard line thinking about another woman’s lips on his probably at this very second!

As I was heading for the kitchen, the door bell rung. “I got it” yelling up towards my mom “mkay” my mom replied. I fixed my hair a little more, while licking my lips. I expected Harry came back for his jacket; I opened the door to not see Harry standing there.

A tall, lean, athletic built teenager stood there. He turned around to display his strong defined jawline and majestic smile. Something about his smile and aura, made me want to slam the door and run back up to my room. But instead I stood there defenseless, wanting to know why this beautiful boy was standing on my porch.

“Well hello love” he has an accent?!!
The cold air rushed in from outside; I wrapped my jacket around me tighter to keep the warmth snuggled to my body. “Can I help you?”
He looked at me amused “Um, don’t you know me love?”
I looked at him quizzically like he was crazy “Uh, no I don’t recall. What is your name, mind I ask”

He walked closer to me now, stepping more into the light. He wasn’t wearing a jacket, which allowed me to see certain fainted scars trailing up his arm – Jeez what did he get himself into? He acknowledged that I ran across them, with pride he pointed at one “I got this one from fighting with Harry”

My eye’s connected back with his, as my heart stopped and fell out of my chest. “What’d you say?” he smiled with amusement, like he was about to eat me. “Oh I know Harry. He’s quiet the looker isn’t he love?”

I didn’t know if I was supposed to take that as a compliment or offense. “How do you know Harry?”
He stepped more out of the light “Oh we go way back.”

He turns around to head down towards the step. What is his name? I have to tell Harry! “Hey you never told me your name” I tried to hide my devious smile form my face and replace it with a friendly smile “It’s Marcel babe”

“Bye, Marcel have a nice night”

“That’s my name don’t wear it out, laters” He put up the peace sign as he turned on to the path and headed towards town.
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Harry’s P.O.V
I lay on my bed, not caring for the homework since I’m actually not a real student. My phone ringed just as I was about to head over to the bathroom.

It was Catalina.

I picked up the phone quicker than a heartbeat “Hello?” I act like I haven’t been waiting for this moment forever. “Harry, Harry”

I swear I could hear the sincere along with worriedness in her voice. “What’s wrong?”
She paused before she spoke up again “Who is Marcel?” I closed my eyes and clenched my jaw I walked over and sat on the bed. This was going to take me time to explain. “Yes, I do”
I could hear her sass “Well who is he?”

How was I going to explain this? He’s my brother who killed your father when you were younger? No, I’m not ready for that “He’s just a friend”
I could hear doubting in her voice as she understood. “Ohhhh okay”

“Why you wanna know angel?”
“Oh, he just stopped by my house”
I was mad now; my heart was burning with revenge. More blood rushed through my body as my heart rate increased. I could feel each thumping of my heart vibrate through my chest. “What! When, why?”

She was scared now “What? What’s wrong? He just came over about 10 minutes ago, but I don’t know why. He didn’t say, he just came and left.”
I was furious now, why is he even back? If he found out about Catalina, then how? I walked over towards the window and leaned my head against the cold frame. I tried to calm myself down as I continued “Did you see which way he went?” my voice was much calmer now, knowing that at least she’s safe.

“Uh, towards town”
Shit!

I walked furiously down the steps and out the door “Where you go-“
I slammed the door before Bobby could finish his sentence. So caught up in my anger, I forgot I was on the phone with Catalina “Hello…hello are you still there?”

I brought the phone back up to my ear; rushing to get off the phone with her. “Um, yeah uh I have to go…..but I’ll pick you up tomorrow kay?”

I could hear her deciding on being stubborn and getting to the bottom of this or just saying okay. “Kay” then she hung up the phone. I think she’s mad, but she’ll get over it tomorrow.
I shoved my hands in my front pockets as I headed towards town.
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Catalina’s P.O.V
I hung up the phone and threw it on the bed. Wow, “um I got to go” I mocked his voice.
Ughhh he’s probably laying down right now, snuggled with his girlfriend. I got up and slipped into the bathroom to take a shower.
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When I came out I checked my phone and had one missed text, I slid my phone lock over and clicked on the icon. Not surprised to see Taylors name pop up.

Tay
Are you still coming to my party, stranger?

I shook my head, as I looked down at the text.

Why wouldn’t I?

She responded instantly, like she’s been waiting for my text.

Well I don’t know, I haven’t talk to you since Aaron’s party. Are you mad at me that I didn’t pick you up? I mean you had the Mr. Hottie to take you soooooo there shouldn’t be a problem.

Mr. Hottie?

Well…..okay I’m still going to your party. And no! I’m not mad at you. I’ll text you tomorrow I’m going to bed. I’m hella tired, love you bye!

She didn’t respond so; I just slipped off my clothes; threw on a long shirt and hopped into bed.
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I woke up slowly, feeling amazing that I don’t have to go to school. I turned on to my back and stretched out my legs and arms, I slowly opened my eyes to a mysterious figure in the corner. My body started panicking as my breath speed up more and more, my heart was thumping really loud. I didn’t know what to do, until the shadow figure came out more into the light.

It was Harry.

My body settled down and relieved it’s self of panic, my heart beat slowed a little bit down, but not all the way……I still have butterflies when I’m around him.
He walked over towards me slowly, making sure that I was calmed down and not ready to throw I knife at him.































Notes

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Comments

@Olliewowwan
I copied some not all, and i did that because i think she's a wonderful, staggering, marvelous writer so i was using some of her ideas to spice up my story...plus this is the only story i did that to not any other. But sorry i made you mad.....and oh by the way love, very classy for you to write this, your sure a lady :) P.S i don't think i;m going to hell for copying some words from a book.

julia styles julia styles
1/26/14

SO @juliastyles. You have made me very angry. But i am a nice and forgiving person so i am not going to comment anymore. I just had to SAY SOMETHING I'M GIVING UP ON YOU. See. I am fun. I should write a fanfiction that is not copied RIGHT. FROM. A. @x?! BOOK. Because i am funny. Fun. Funniest. Funnier. Oui. SO NOW I WILL STOP. GOOD BYE. AU REVOIR. HEJ DÅ. J'EN AI MARRE DE TOI. JAG ÄR TRÖTT PÅ DIG.

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14

Do you know what really grinds my gears? What is that? Oh, you really want to know? Well then... WHEN SOMEBODY COPIES MY FAVORITE BOOK. Yeah. That is right. You heard me. Deal with it. Just throw yourself into a wall and beg for forgivness to Becca Fitzpatrick. 'Cause you hun, ya going to hell. SKURKEBURKEN!!!! "Say provocative again, it makes your mouth look provocative." RIGHT FROM THE BOOK. BOM BAM. SHABAM. HELEVETS JÄVLA SKIT. Frustrating.

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14

OMG YOU HAVE LITERALLY JUST COPIED LIKE EVERYTHING THEY SAY. AUGAHAHAH. But i like the plot tho... Because you STOLE it!!!

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14

Damn that makes me angry.

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14