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TEMPTATION

CHAPTER 19: It's Over

Catalina’s P.O.V
I looked outside the window at basically nothing since the sky was dark.
I gave up and walked over towards my bed; I could see the light on my phone glow in the dark. I grabbed it and brought it up to my ear. “Hello?”

I plopped on the bed waiting for a response. I heard a ruff sound in the background and some sort of scratching “Catalina?”
I took a deep breath saving my heart a panic. It was just Harry.
“Yes?”

Waiting for him to respond a breeze came rushing over me. I turned to look over at the window. Huh that’s funny I thought Harry closed it! I walked over to the window “Are you still there cat?”
I locked the window back and jingle the lock up “Yeah” I check the left and right side of the roof “I’m here”

I turned around and stood right where I was afraid to take a step forward. My breath was slammed out of my lungs and my knees were unstable.
Marcel stood across the room by the bathroom. He wasn’t the same guy that I talked to the night of Taylor’s party he’s changed; his eyes were filled with vengeance.
“Hello….Catalina? Cat are you there answer…what’s wrong?”

I badly wanted to answer but my fear wouldn’t let one word slip out my mouth. I dropped the phone on the floor just as a tear slipped down my cheek.
Marcel took a step forward

“Don’t be scared love….I just want to talk”
He took a step forward and I took a step back. My back collided with the window. “Where’s you pretty boy boyfriend?”

I reached behind my back to undo the lock. He was searching around the room; seeming to be pretty nervous after he stated the question. “He…he left”
He turned his eyes back to me. “Well that’s great”
I tried to jiggle the lock down but it wouldn’t budge. He took another step towards me; he was now by my bed. “Love if you don’t mind me asking…um why are you still alive?”

My face went pale. Oh no he’s here to finish the job! He’s going to kill me…he’s going to rip out my heart.
As frightened as I was, I wanted to so badly get out that room. I jiggled the lock once more and it unlocked. Without him even hinting to my plan I jumped out the window.

I felt two strong arms lock around my waste as I was drawn back into the bedroom “Ahh let go now!! Leave me alone please!” he threw me on his shoulder. Headed over to the bed and flung me down. He straddled me and locked both of his hands around my wrists, pinning me down.

“If Harry can’t finish the job…I will!!!”
He shifted one of his hands free causing his other hand to hold down both my wrists. He reached in his back pocket for a knife, but not any knife it had ridged edges and was dark grey with a sharp tip. I eyed it closely and slowly, my tears started to stream out my eyes like a waterfall.

He glided the smooth knife across my lips “Shushssss love it will only hurt for a minute”
He gripped the knife tightly and drew it back out of my eye sight. I tried to move off underneath his strength. He held me tighter, cutting off the circulation in my wrists.
A painful strike throbbed on my side, before I blacked out.

I could hear things around me but they were faint. I hazily opened my eyes and saw blood stained on my white shirt.
Where’s Harry?!!!!
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Harry’s P.O.V
I parked outside of Catalina’s house and hurried and rushed to her front door. I knocked and knocked and knocked but there was no response. I took my phone out my pocket; backing off the porch to see cat’s window. There were no lights on, I heard the phone ring and ring but there was no pick up. I slid it into my back pocket and started for her window.

When I reached the top I quickly hid behind the wall. I peeked over and saw Marcel over by her dresser playing with something but I couldn’t see. Quickly I searched for Catalina, my eyes drew to some legs dangling off the bed; they weren’t moving.

My heart stopped. My anger consumed by body. I hurried and climbed through the window. Marcel turned around in surprise dropping the ball, letting it roll underneath the bed.

“Well, well, well” He said. Quickly I ran over to the bed, not wanting to touch cat because I felt like I would hurt her….so I just sat there. “Cat….Catalina can you hear me? Stay with me!” she opened her eyes slowly before closing the again. “I feel cold Harry” I grabbed her hand.

“No need to help her….she’s practically dead” Marcel remarked. I looked up at him in anger; I saw him smiling deviously while twirling a metal knife in his hand.

I withdrew my hands from Catalina’s running over towards Marcel. I grabbed his shoulder shoving him up against the wall. I socked him the face causing him to knock over unbalanced.

I stepped back getting into a fighting position. He gained his balance wiping off the blood that was dripping from his lips. “Oh you little shit”
He came charging towards me, punching me in the stomach. I kicked his legs causing him to flounder to the ground like a pile of bricks. I straddled him punching him in the face then in the stomach once and twice. He grabbed my arms restraining me back and rolled over on to me.

Him now on top he choked me with both hands. I hit his wrists twice with my fist but he wouldn’t budge.
I lied there searching for something to use against him but I was tough out of luck. Right when I turned my face to the left I was able to see under the bed. The ball!! I reached and reached trying to stretch out my fingers inch by inch.

My finger barely grazed the ball causing it to roll towards me. I grabbed it; bringing it up to collide with Marcels face. He rolled over onto the floor holding his head.
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Catalina’s P.O.V
I Laid there still, I could hear Marcel and Harry tussling on the floor but I couldn’t see them because I couldn’t move. I could feel the coldness captivate my body, but I was pretty sure it was just the window.

I slowly dragged my eye lids open, showing me sitting there staring at the window.
I see a flash of green light before Harry is standing, breathing heavy by my side. “Cat…Catalina” he swallowed trying to catch his breath. He lifted my hand entwining it with mine “Just hold on, it’s going to heal within minutes”

Heal?! Within minutes?!! What is he talking about?!

Notes

DUHHHH DUN DUN DUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! WOW!!



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Comments

@Olliewowwan
I copied some not all, and i did that because i think she's a wonderful, staggering, marvelous writer so i was using some of her ideas to spice up my story...plus this is the only story i did that to not any other. But sorry i made you mad.....and oh by the way love, very classy for you to write this, your sure a lady :) P.S i don't think i;m going to hell for copying some words from a book.

julia styles julia styles
1/26/14

SO @juliastyles. You have made me very angry. But i am a nice and forgiving person so i am not going to comment anymore. I just had to SAY SOMETHING I'M GIVING UP ON YOU. See. I am fun. I should write a fanfiction that is not copied RIGHT. FROM. A. @x?! BOOK. Because i am funny. Fun. Funniest. Funnier. Oui. SO NOW I WILL STOP. GOOD BYE. AU REVOIR. HEJ DÅ. J'EN AI MARRE DE TOI. JAG ÄR TRÖTT PÅ DIG.

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14

Do you know what really grinds my gears? What is that? Oh, you really want to know? Well then... WHEN SOMEBODY COPIES MY FAVORITE BOOK. Yeah. That is right. You heard me. Deal with it. Just throw yourself into a wall and beg for forgivness to Becca Fitzpatrick. 'Cause you hun, ya going to hell. SKURKEBURKEN!!!! "Say provocative again, it makes your mouth look provocative." RIGHT FROM THE BOOK. BOM BAM. SHABAM. HELEVETS JÄVLA SKIT. Frustrating.

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14

OMG YOU HAVE LITERALLY JUST COPIED LIKE EVERYTHING THEY SAY. AUGAHAHAH. But i like the plot tho... Because you STOLE it!!!

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14

Damn that makes me angry.

Olliewowwan Olliewowwan
1/24/14