Ok, so I see a lot of people are making reviews etc! So before I tell someone off or judge people I like to either 1. Get to know them really well and 2. I would like to see them inperson before I go judging! ps: I very rarely judge as I HATE judging people :) So for me to score any stories/reviews this is how I score. 1 = Needs more work, your heading towards the right path, however, you need some extra work on it. 2 = Your very slowly getting there, however, still needs a lot of improving 3 = Satisfactory, you know how to write, theres just a lot of editing that needs to be done 4 = Keep the work up! Your doing fantastic and almost there :) 5 = Well Done! You have improved. Your a fantastic writer. You should consider being a writer as a career when your older :) (I very rarely give out a score of a 6 however, in saying that I have seen stories that are worth a 6) Also, I am totally honest I am 10000000% honest and more. I NEVER lie to people. I am upfront. Comment on this and I will give you a score and some feedback on your story! Peace!!