Fanfiction 101
They Don’t Know About Us
(3) I’ve read fanfics about spies before that I’ve really enjoyed, but yours is just eh. Your grammar is okay, but I would use a lot more details, and a little less talking. There’s only one chapter so far, so I can’t be too sure on my thoughts, but you definitely shouldn’t give up just because I gave you a 3. I have a feeling you can make a great story out of this within time.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16