Fanfiction 101
My Weakness
(4) What…? I’m just so confused like… There were just really short and many points of view, and then they just met, but they’re all like love at first sight and stuff, and it was admittedly kind of cute, but no. I feel like the pace could slow down just a bit because yes, it was rushed even though she points that out. Also, you should try using less dialogue and more details.
Overall, it was pretty eh, kind of confusing but cute.
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12/31/16