Fanfiction 101
Sleeping at Last
(8) Grammar definitely isn’t a problem for you. You have a good amount of description, but I’m not too sure what I think of the plot. It seems like a good idea, but I feel like it might just become a drag. However, I’ll be continuing to read the story to see what kinds of complication you can add.
Overall, I think you did a good job. The only thing I would fix is what you’re naming the chapters. Either use numbers, or spell them out, not both. Otherwise, I can’t wait to see what happens next.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16