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The way we kissed.
(3) *The Way We Kissed* The story is way too rushed and typical. Three best friends all falling for a different member of One Direction, and fast. Also, One Direction attending University? Not likely. They’re already famous; they don’t need to attend school.
You need to slow down, start a new paragraph each time a new person speaks, and be more realistic.
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12/31/16