The Story Critic
The Fire in His Eyes
Rating: 9
BRILLIANT!!!!!
ALL I HAVE TO RREALLY SAY!
Just work on your grammar and punctuation a bit!
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(Sorry this review SUCKED, but I am rushing right now n___n)
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Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !
please review my story: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/39122/Gone/
thanks x
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