The Story Critic
My Bully's Boyfriend
Rating: 9 or 9.5
Positive Points:
- Some Cliffhangers (Dun Dun Dun!)
- Little Punctuation mistakes
- Not to long, Not to short chapters
There is some much more positive places, I cant explain!
Negitave Points:
-Just a few punctuation and capitalization mistakes.
-You need to update!
Overall Thoughts: BRILLIAM! (See what I did there ;D) I love it! You need to update more often though.
Positive Points:
- Some Cliffhangers (Dun Dun Dun!)
- Little Punctuation mistakes
- Not to long, Not to short chapters
There is some much more positive places, I cant explain!
Negitave Points:
-Just a few punctuation and capitalization mistakes.
-You need to update!
Overall Thoughts: BRILLIAM! (See what I did there ;D) I love it! You need to update more often though.
Notes
Check out: "My Bully's Boyfriend", Here:http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/16867/My-bullys-boyfriend/
plz check out my story it's called "inspirational messages" and take your time I don't care when you review it as long as you do thanks so much
3/10/15