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Stupid for Letting You Go.

Rating: 9.5

I love this story and everything about it!

Positive Points:
-LOTS of drama! It keeps the readers, reading!
-Cliffhangers! The readers will really want to know what's coming next!
-Little punctuation mistakes.
-Well thought out and written!

Negitave Points:
-There were a few places where I found some letters that were supposed to be capitalized,
Not capitalized. Very few though. That's the only reason I gave you a 9.5.

Overall thoughts: Great! I will Definantly read this again!

Comments

plz check out my story it's called "inspirational messages" and take your time I don't care when you review it as long as you do thanks so much

Corrina Alicia Bishop
3/10/15

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !