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Two Kinds In One Tutor

(unexpected rainy day)…..day 3

I woke up smiling knowing that harry was there but I turned around and he wasnt next to me. I didnt stress it though, I simply just got out of bed. I seen harry in the hallway leaning on the wall reading a book. I came up behind him and said "boo!" he got scared and dropped his book. "Jesus star, can u stop being immature for once!?" in a nerdy voice. he scurried to pick up his book and the cover of it said 'how to get girls'

Great marcels back I thought in my head. I thought of why he had that book. It was actually funny. But I was still upset that harry went away. I sat down on the couch and he sat next to me.

"Ur really cute and I shouldnt have hollered at u in the hallway, I just got nervous" he didnt Stutter as much anymore and he actually called me cute. "No problem" I said kinda uncomfortable. He rubbed my leg and whispered "you know theres more to me than just school and books"

Notes

Im sooooo sorry guys. I promise im back on track with the story. Please comment and give me some ideas for the next chapter. Ill give a shout out to all the people that did all for commands for the last chapter and a shout out to the persons idea I will be writing in the next chapter. Love you guys

Comments

@emmaphants
thanks so much, when i get time too, ill try to write more. ive just been very busy lately

i think its cute! i havent had very much free time lately so i havent been able to read much but what ive read is cute

emmaphants emmaphants
12/20/13

@emmaphants
oh alright thanks, i was thinking about that too. i was trying to figure out how to seperate the paragraphs but ill start next chapter. but other than that, what do u think of the plot of the story itself?

not trying to be mean, just trying to help but try using paragraphs. everytime a different person starts talking you should start a new paragraph. it makes it easier for the reader to focus. Also, instead of saying 'u' say 'you'. Also capitalize names and the first word of sentences. I know it's fanfiction and you probably feel like grammar and proper writing doesn't matter but a lot of people won't read it if the mechanics of the story are bad no matter how good the plot is. I don't mean to be a bitch, i'm sorry I'm just trying to help... I had a problem with long paragraphs too when I first started.
emmaphants emmaphants
12/8/13
@nandos for lunch?
thnx :) im glad u like it. ill continue it sometime this week