What it's about: it's about a girl named Victoria who is in a relationship with Harry and just before he come back from tour she finds out she's pregnant. Then a big twist happens and well you'll have to read to find out!
rate: 7.5
only thing I would do is add some cliff hangers. And you know insane reactions of people finding out she's pregnant
its à really great storey so yah don't change the way your writing :)