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Crossing paths
Juliet has her life. Lily has her life.
What they have in common?
Nothing, but their dad.
But as Lily gets kicked out of school, they are forced to deal with each others lives.
Both not sure how to handle the situation, only knowing they have to find a way. Together.
Rate: 8.0
from what I read you did a good job at writing! I like how you add all of your different POV's. keep writing the way you are your doing great!
What they have in common?
Nothing, but their dad.
But as Lily gets kicked out of school, they are forced to deal with each others lives.
Both not sure how to handle the situation, only knowing they have to find a way. Together.
Rate: 8.0
from what I read you did a good job at writing! I like how you add all of your different POV's. keep writing the way you are your doing great!
11/27/13