What it's about: it's about a girl named Rachel who is in an abusive relationship with her boyfriend. He doesn't like it when she hangs out with her BFF Niall. She still does though (sorry it's not exactly what it's about).
rating: 9- I couldn't put it down!
its a really great storey although you just started. I think you should just include some cliff hangers here and there (just to add suspense later), also you know maybe someone in1D should find out about her bruises and not tell Niall and stuff.
again really good I would definitely suggest it.