What it's about: it's about a girl named Holly who moves from California to England. Where she meets our favourite group of boys. But with jealous ex's what kind of drama is Holly going to get into!?
rate: 8.0
your doing great so far! Adding crazy ex's in stories is a great way to add suspense. Only thing I don't like is changing between Melissa and Bella. Maybe go back and explain that's her nickname. Cause it was a bit confusing at first. Other than that, great job!