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Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing]

Number 71: Laddy Land

Not everyone British says,

Love,

Mate

and Lad

All the time.

"sorry, love" Niall apologised. I nodded at the lad and smiled.
"Niall, mate! we're leaving" Liam calls with the rest of the lads behind him. Niall skipped off with his lads and lived happily ever after in laddy land, the end.

Notes

sorry, this ones really bad but oh well. I know I'm not updating as often as I used to but I finally got a tafe account which means I can go on twitter while at school :) (follow me @zapitszen) but anyway, I'm starting to run out of moments so if you guys have any ideas, please do tell me. Love you guys, bye.

Comments

It's kinda annoying when Kylie is going to a concert and she always goes to a 5SOS concert , I LOVE 5SOS! But at least go to a Katy Perry concert once in a while.

Brianna J.
11/5/14

I don't like how in some fanfictions they are getting abused, but their parents gave them a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and she can afford to go shopping. or when they say that they are poor. Probably because they have a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and brand new clothes. Not to mention she has to pay a phone bill. I'd like to know how these girls do it, because I'm lucky to even have a phone.

metomlinson
7/23/14

I hate it when your reading a fan fiction and Kylie does something so incredibly stupid and it's like no Kylie don't jump off the cliff hahaha

CallMeBri
7/21/14

Hey I hate it when, Kylie is always going to a concert. And Harry watches her the entire performance im like HE IS A STALKER!!!!

alovinliam
5/12/14

I hate when people rush the story...I was reading this one where Niall kissed this girl back stage ok....next chapter ITS 3 FUCKING YEARS LATER AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO DATE NIALL ANYMORE AND IM LIKE DAFUQ HAPPENED IN THOSE THREE YEARS!