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Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing]

Number 4: Lets. Describe. Everything. In. One. Sentence.

The. Author. Starts. Describing. Like. This.

I woke up.
I rolled out of bed.
I walked over to the balcony.
I opened the door.
I closed the door behind me.
I jumped off the freakin' balcony because I started to describe everything in one sentence!

Or when the writer doesn't add much description but then all of a sudden the moonlight is shinning its silvery glow onto his pale skin as he moves closer and closer, his blue eyes sparkling like the insides of a blue gem.

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Comments

It's kinda annoying when Kylie is going to a concert and she always goes to a 5SOS concert , I LOVE 5SOS! But at least go to a Katy Perry concert once in a while.

Brianna J.
11/5/14

I don't like how in some fanfictions they are getting abused, but their parents gave them a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and she can afford to go shopping. or when they say that they are poor. Probably because they have a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and brand new clothes. Not to mention she has to pay a phone bill. I'd like to know how these girls do it, because I'm lucky to even have a phone.

metomlinson
7/23/14

I hate it when your reading a fan fiction and Kylie does something so incredibly stupid and it's like no Kylie don't jump off the cliff hahaha

CallMeBri
7/21/14

Hey I hate it when, Kylie is always going to a concert. And Harry watches her the entire performance im like HE IS A STALKER!!!!

alovinliam
5/12/14

I hate when people rush the story...I was reading this one where Niall kissed this girl back stage ok....next chapter ITS 3 FUCKING YEARS LATER AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO DATE NIALL ANYMORE AND IM LIKE DAFUQ HAPPENED IN THOSE THREE YEARS!