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Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing]

Number 28: Those Point Of Views

I hate it when....

The author switches one point of view to another.

Kylie is talking about everything for 8 paragraphs and then it switches to,

I dunno, Zayn's POV

and it goes through everything Kylie just said AGAIN!

And Zayn only has like 1 thought and there are only a few extra words that weren't in Kylie's POV

It's like..... I just read all of that again? For one little piece of information that didn't matter? Are you serious?

You know there is this new invention called 3rd person POV!!! -_-

Or when, the author switches POV's all the time,

for example,

Kylie's POV
I ate cheese.
Zayn's POV
Kylie is so pretty when she eats cheese.
Harry's POV
Why is Kylie eating cheese? WHAT ABOUT STARBUCKS?!

It gets really confusing, and annoying.

{inspired by BooBear_CherBear - girl, you and I could be great friends, lol}

Comments

It's kinda annoying when Kylie is going to a concert and she always goes to a 5SOS concert , I LOVE 5SOS! But at least go to a Katy Perry concert once in a while.

Brianna J.
11/5/14

I don't like how in some fanfictions they are getting abused, but their parents gave them a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and she can afford to go shopping. or when they say that they are poor. Probably because they have a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and brand new clothes. Not to mention she has to pay a phone bill. I'd like to know how these girls do it, because I'm lucky to even have a phone.

metomlinson
7/23/14

I hate it when your reading a fan fiction and Kylie does something so incredibly stupid and it's like no Kylie don't jump off the cliff hahaha

CallMeBri
7/21/14

Hey I hate it when, Kylie is always going to a concert. And Harry watches her the entire performance im like HE IS A STALKER!!!!

alovinliam
5/12/14

I hate when people rush the story...I was reading this one where Niall kissed this girl back stage ok....next chapter ITS 3 FUCKING YEARS LATER AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO DATE NIALL ANYMORE AND IM LIKE DAFUQ HAPPENED IN THOSE THREE YEARS!