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Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing]

Number 13: No Paragraphs For You

the author has no idea what paragraphs are and just writes everything like this:

"Kylie, Kylie, Kylie!" Niall ran around in a circle around Kylie as she stands still and drinks her vanilla mocha with chocolate sprinkles on the top. Harry runs into the room carrying a carrot with Louis trailing behind him screaming, "Hazza, give my love back!" and Liam just shouts for everyone to shut up. Everyone stops running around and shuts up because Liam never swears and this is a massive deal for everyone. Kylie's vanilla mocha with chocolate sprinkles on the top falls to the floor and Niall tries to grab it but misses and then shouts, "NOOO!" as the drink spills all over the floor. Louis and Harry look at each other before Harry gives Louis back his carrot and blah blah blah blah blah blah you get the picture.

{inspired by Marygrace}

Notes

that actually took a lot of effort

Comments

It's kinda annoying when Kylie is going to a concert and she always goes to a 5SOS concert , I LOVE 5SOS! But at least go to a Katy Perry concert once in a while.

Brianna J.
11/5/14

I don't like how in some fanfictions they are getting abused, but their parents gave them a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and she can afford to go shopping. or when they say that they are poor. Probably because they have a laptop, an iphone 5, an ipad, and brand new clothes. Not to mention she has to pay a phone bill. I'd like to know how these girls do it, because I'm lucky to even have a phone.

metomlinson
7/23/14

I hate it when your reading a fan fiction and Kylie does something so incredibly stupid and it's like no Kylie don't jump off the cliff hahaha

CallMeBri
7/21/14

Hey I hate it when, Kylie is always going to a concert. And Harry watches her the entire performance im like HE IS A STALKER!!!!

alovinliam
5/12/14

I hate when people rush the story...I was reading this one where Niall kissed this girl back stage ok....next chapter ITS 3 FUCKING YEARS LATER AND SHE DOESNT WANT TO DATE NIALL ANYMORE AND IM LIKE DAFUQ HAPPENED IN THOSE THREE YEARS!