How I met Louis Tomlinson

Lily's POV
i woke up the next morning and could feel only cold fabric on the other side of the bed. I got up and put on one of Louis' over sized shirts. I went to the kitchen and saw Louis making tea. I grabbed a warm cup and we went to the living room. we flipped on the news and just cuddled together and relaxed a bit. "So darling when's your first exam?" He asked while playing with my hair.
"it's on Friday and its for my medical class" I replied. Louis nodded while running his fingers through my hair. "How about you? Are you guys going to be doing filming for music videos?" I asked.
"we're filming a video and we're done and so right now were just editing and stuff." He said.
"that's so cool, is that what you were doing over the week?" I asked.
"yeah, I want you to be one of the first people to see the final cut. The director, John, said it should be ready by Wednesday. So if you can spare like an hour that would be really great." He said.
"yeah sure I'd love to" I said.
"great! I can't wait for you to see it" he half yelled.
"I can't wait to see it" I replied.
"So you want to do anything today?" He asked.
"Sure what could we do?" I asked.
"Hmm, we could go and see the London eye, Big Ben, you know, tourist stuff." He suggested.
"Oooh, I'd love that, I've been living here for 4 months and I haven't been to any tourist places!" I jumped off the couch and went to Louis' room. He followed me to the room where I found a change of clothes that I had left at his house a while back and went to take a shower. I got in and started to pour hot water down my body. Suddenly I heard a knock on the door and jumped a bit. "Come in" I said. Louis quickly got into the shower with me before I could reject it. I looked at his amazing muscles and the ink that was on his chest. The number 78, and 'it is what it is'. I knew it was a tribute to his grandparents, because I had asked when I was at his house. Though he didn't know about my tattoo on my back I knew he would see it today. I turned around so then I could wash my hair out.
"Hey, I never noticed that tattoo before" Louis said. "What does it say?"
"Be who you are and say what you feel. My grandpa would say that to me all the time before he died." I said getting some conditioner. "Now get out, we'll have plenty of time to shower together later." I said
"Your no fun" he said getting out and wrapping a towel around his waist. I finished up my shower and get out to let Louis get in. I got dressed in the outfit I brought out. Which was a pair of light blue skinny jeans, a light green tshirt an infinity scarf and my jacket. Louis came out of the shower and I went to go and wait for him in the living room. When he came out he was wearing a loose pair of dark jeans, a white shirt and he favourite jacket. "You ready?" He asked holding out his arm.
"I'm ready" I said taking his arm as we headed out for an exciting day.

Notes

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