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If you only knew....(Larry Stylinson)

First Sight

*Louis POV*

Me and my mate Liam were walking, we just decided to go to the new Starbucks at the other side of town. Liam says "damn that girl was FIT!" I just kind of shrug and Liam laughs like its some kind of joke. You see I'm gay he's known for about 3 years now when I tried to kiss him when we first met. but now we're just best mates. I can trust him with anything. We walk into the Starbucks and I see the sexiest guy I have ever seen. Like in my life. He must of been laughing at something one of the other workers said, because he has these dimples and the greenest eyes you've ever seen. Man. Liam sees me looking, I just eye him daring him to make a comment. He shrugs and does the little hands up in the air thing. As we walk up to the counter I order mine and Liam's drinks when he asks for my name "L-l-louis" I stuttered out. He smiles again and says "hey I love that name!." I say my thanks and wait patiently for the drinks. Liam walks up and says "whats taking so long?" Harry looks up and I see his face fall a little when he's sees Liam next to me. "Sorry sir it'll be a few seconds" he says. I wonder of he thinks me and Liam are together. I really hope not though. As Liam and I are leaving I look back to smile and wave to see that Harry was staring at my bum. I blushed and looked away. And that was when I knew I'd go out of my way everyday just to come here and see his beautiful face.

Notes

So no judgement please I just need some constructive criticism because this is my first story... Ever so I'm really nervous hope you like it.

Comments

Update

onexdirection onexdirection
1/17/14

update please

xrightnow xrightnow
1/2/14
yeah update
xrightnow xrightnow
12/3/13
I love it!
KierstenPayne KierstenPayne
12/3/13
yayy good update "LOUIS DONT BE MAD AT LIAM ITS NOIT HIS FAULT"
XavierDye XavierDye
12/3/13