
the baby proposal
chapter 18
laylas pov
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''um hi'' someone said from behind me
''hi'' i said turning around to see harry
''can we talk'' he said
''make it snappy were playing dress up'' i said moitioning to my outfit
''okay im so sorry layla i didnt mean not to stick up for the girls'' he said stepping closer to me
''well say sorry to them not me you confused them'' i said
''can i admit something'' he said stepping closer
'sure but hurry up'' i said
'okay im sorry for everything ive ever done to you'' he said
and then shock set in when i felt his lips on mine
'uh i have to go play dress up'' i said grabbing my bottle of water and walking back to the girls
'mama next one can we do cray cray' maddy said
'ya sure' i grabbed their hands and walked them to the closet
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''um hi'' someone said from behind me
''hi'' i said turning around to see harry
''can we talk'' he said
''make it snappy were playing dress up'' i said moitioning to my outfit
''okay im so sorry layla i didnt mean not to stick up for the girls'' he said stepping closer to me
''well say sorry to them not me you confused them'' i said
''can i admit something'' he said stepping closer
'sure but hurry up'' i said
'okay im sorry for everything ive ever done to you'' he said
and then shock set in when i felt his lips on mine
'uh i have to go play dress up'' i said grabbing my bottle of water and walking back to the girls
'mama next one can we do cray cray' maddy said
'ya sure' i grabbed their hands and walked them to the closet
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I think it's perfect how it is. But you do what you think would be better for the story. :)
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