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A Bit of Hope (Louis Tomlinson Fanfiction)

Chapter 3

I feel myself open up, and my eyes swell. I've never told anyone the whole story, and it felt so good. Like a complete weight was lifted off my shoulders. How was it, that I could open up to a complete stranger but I couldn't do that with anyone else? I smile at Louis letting a tear stream down my face. He smiles and brings me into a massive hug. His embrace was so sweet and sincere. He put all of his emotions just in that simple hug.

"I'm so sorry, Ella" he whispers into my ear. I squeeze my eyes trying not to let more tears fall. I felt so secure in his arms. Like every worry went away, like I didn't have cancer, and like I was the only person in this entire shop. I let go, and just stare into his eyes. Those bright blue orbs pull you in, and won't let you go.

BUZZ BUZZ... BUZZ BUZZ

Unfortunately taken out of my thoughts by my phone. I smile shyly, and grab out my iPhone.

*Elz! Where are you? Are you ok! Call me hun, I'm worried! -Mum xx.

Ugh! Does my mum have to ruin everything?

"Well, this was a definitely a lovely chat. But I have to get going before my mother flips," I smile and start grabbing my things to stuff in my purse. I feel something grab onto my hand, and I turn quickly around.

"El, umm.. I would really like to see you again. You are really cool and down to earth, not like every other girl," He spits out.

I chuckle and grab a napkin and a pen from my purse. I quickly write my number, and hand it to him. "Call or text me, slick." I smile and walk out of Starbucks.

I slide into my little car, and slump into my seat. Did that actually just happen? I just gave my number to some random guy! But he is so sweet, and generous; not like other guys. He didn't look at me like "she's the girl with cancer". He looks at me like a typical teenage girl;with no cancer, a full head of hair, and a normal body. I ponder all of my thoughts, and a smile appears on my face. I finally put my keys on the ignition and drive away.

.........................................................................................................................................................

I get into my driveway still thinking about my afternoon. This day could not have been perfect. I finally unbuckle my seat belt and grab my things. I look at our screen door, and my mum is standing with her arms crossed like she was going to pounce any moment. I smile sheepishly, and walk into the door. She holds open the door, and gives me a stern look.

"Ella Louise Crane, where have you been! I have been worried sick!" She hugs me tightly and then lets go.

"Sorry, I should have called. I stopped to get some coffee and was talking with someone," I quickly say with a smirk on my face.

"Who was this person? Do I know her?" she says taking my coat and hanging it in the closet.

"Umm... No you don't know him. He's actually my new nurse's son. I met him in the hospital, and we ran into each other at Starbucks," I explain to her plopping onto my couch.

She gives me a confused look, and then smiles. "Well tell me about him! Is he cute?" I giggle as she excitingly sits down by me. Sometimes she acts more like a teenager than I do.

"He's very cute; he had adorable blue eyes, and is tall with perfect hair. He's really sweet too!
He made me feel like a normal girl, and didn't look at me like everyone else. With sympathy and remorse about my cancer. He was genuine, and caring," I remanence with a smile on my face.

"Well he seems like a very lovely young lad. Do you like him? What's his name, love?" My mum questions me.

"I don't know if I like him yet. But his name is Louis Tomlinson," I say looking down.

"Wait Louis Tomlinson? Isn't he that young bloke from some boy band?" She continues to say going into the kitchen. She puts the kettle on the stove for some fresh hot tea.

Wait, was she right? He did seem familiar. "Mum, I'll be right back!" I yell running up the stair to my room. I grab my laptop and run back down the stairs. I huff and puff from the running, with the chemo I'm so weak. I slowly make it back to the kitchen. I pull out the stool from the island, and sit down. I open up my laptop and bring up Google. I type in the search bar: Louis Tomlinson. I was wowed when over a million searches came up for him. I click on one of his Images and just stare in awe.

"Umm.. Mum you're right! Oh my goodness, I'm talking to one of the boys of One Direction!"

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Louisloveer Louisloveer
9/27/13
Update more plz
Louisloveer Louisloveer
9/25/13
Awwww! Thanks for updating!! Please do it again soon !
Please update!!
Please update I want to read more :)
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9/21/13