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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 10

Harry's pov

I opened the door for as she walked out, I was such a gentleman.... wait! what is this girl doing to me?!?I'm not a gentleman. I'm the fuck them leave them type. “are you ok?” she beautiful voice took my attention from my thoughts. “ yeah I'm fine” I look at beautiful light blue eyes. They were soft, she didn't look like she should be in gang life, but like a famous person or something. I see her starting to blush when I start to check her out. She didn't have a very big chest or ass, but I didn't care. She was tall with beautiful light brown hair and light skin. She was wearing this: http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=99856771 She didn't have any tattoos or piercing. I liked about her.. she had natural beauty.
I was again snapped out of my thought when I heard a familiar voice call my name... Niall ... I look around quickly trying to hide Autumn. I look over where Autumn was, she wasn't there anymore. Where did she go!?! I started to panic a little. “ what's wrong haz?” Niall asked me stopping my search. “noting..” I trailed off , “than what are you looking around for?” he quickly responded “umm---” “thud!” Niall and I both turned our attention to a girl who had fallen to the floor. “ what the fuck!” Niall yelled. Autumn had fear running through her eyes. I look at Autumn's bleeding knee, I couldn't help myself anymore, I ran over to Autumn picking up off the floor and placing her in the passenger side of my car “are you ok?” I was very concerned “I'm fine” she responded. That made me feel a bit better.

“who's she?” Niall asked, luckily he didn't know who she was or I don't know what I'd do. “she is a friend of mine.” I thought up a lie, well not completely, she was kinda my friend now. “Why was she sneaking around?” UGH! Why is Niall so nosy at times. I didn't have an answer for this one, this time. Worry was plastered on both Autumn and I's face, I think Niall had an idea of what was going on by his facial expression. I look at Niall with pleading eyes, he ignored them and snapped is vision at Autumn. He wasn't happy with her, His eyes looked like they wanted to kill her. “Bitch!” he yelled at her storming her way “ don't you dare touch my fucking friends!”

I quickly grab Niall. “please Niall” I whisper. “No! This Bitch turned you soft so she could get away with everything!” He was stubborn sometimes. I look over at Autumn, She looked like she had no problem kicking Niall ass if he doesn't leave her alone; even thou she was in no condition to fight. “don't call me a fucking Bitch!” she spat at him, He tried pushing past me but I grabbed him. “STOP!”

“why are you trying to protect her after she kicked your ass” They both looked at me. “because..”I can't believe I was going to say it but I had to “I like her Niall! A lot...” I trailed off, Niall jaw dropped to his feet. I look over at Autumn who was hiding her blushing face.

Notes

i made this short.... to be honest i was to lazy to keep going .. but 2 chapters 1 day.
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11/24/13
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11/24/13
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11/24/13