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This is Me

Chapter Nine

"Yes, yes, yes. I see that." Zayn rolled his eyes as I stood in front of his desk bragging about my awesomeness.
"And then Perrie's face was all: 'Whaaaaaaa?' and I was all like 'Who is that?' OH she was so priceless!" He laughed gently.
"Yes, she is priceless, isn't she..." He zoned out, and just as quickly snapped out of it. "You look great, once again." He smiled sadly.
"Oh, thanks! You look handsome, as usual." I winked, before pulling myself up, and walking, or, floating to the door.
"Wait, where are you going?" He stood up abruptly. I pointed out.
"Ummmm, Home? Remember, I have to go back and watch Perrie."
"Oh. Right. Ok then." I waved and smiled, disappearing through the doorway and appearing back in my bedroom.

Notes

OMG so sorry! So short, so lame, gtg mom wants computer! BYE LUV U ALLLLLLL whoa. I have no clue where all that came from.

Comments

o my goodness. update. now.

Faith
1/10/14

STOP SYAIG YOUR WRITING SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How can I prove to you that you are actually a dry good author???

fascinated
12/21/13

I do not believe you when you say a chapter sucks@Tosh, because I've never read anything that you've written that has bored me. So please post the next chapter, but if your truly unhappy with it, take it down.

fascinated
12/11/13

@fascinated
I've been writing a new chapter, but it sucks, so I re-wrote it, and that sucked too...

Tosh
12/11/13

I absolutely love this story, because it keeps me guessing, and I never expect what happens. Like, at first, I thought she was going to almost commit suicide, then zayn would save her and they would full in love and then there would be perrie, and then I thought that she would go to heaven when she died but full in love with someone from hell or get kicked out of heaven, and then I thought that she wouldn't get together with Liam, and then I thought she would tell Liam that they should just be friends!!!! Never once had I guessed what Los going to happen, which is vey rare in a story!!!!!!!! So pleas do update soon :)

fascinated
12/11/13

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