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What happened

The knock

So on a perfect day in New York City this girl Vanessa that's me I'm 16 and my sister Nicole is 17 and we got an 2 story apartment together and both work at Starbucks she got the night shift I got the day shift. So one day I came home from work and see her sitting in the couch all board so I said " hey u wanna go to the club" Nicole said " yup let me get ready" then I said " me to" so when we finished getting ready we hear a strange knock in the door we both looked at each other and said" who could it be"

Notes

I know it sucks this is my 1st one so please rate and comment I promise it will get better lol

Comments

U should make longer chapters I know ur really good at this
Nevaeh Styles Nevaeh Styles
9/6/13
@Katie
Thanks
Sylvia horan Sylvia horan
9/6/13
Lolz Sylvia really ur black infinity lolz well can u give meh a black challenger
Nevaeh Styles Nevaeh Styles
9/5/13
Omgosh gurl u takin ma ideas lolz no jk hehehehe love I
Nevaeh Styles Nevaeh Styles
9/5/13
Awesome story. I gave it a ten
Kate Kate
9/5/13