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boys before flowers (one direction fan fiction )

New York city here I come

" Attention passengers ! The plane is going to take off a few minutes later on line-12 New York international airport ! We hope you had a good flight and wish you a great time in there !"
I heard that recorded famale voice said such a thing as I still had remained my eyes closed .

Then every thing was vibrating and I was wondering "is it earth quake ? " A voice answered in my head : Of course not silly were flying in air !!!

And then with the thought that we have crashed or some thing I immediately opened my eyes seeing Alison with an angry face sayin " oh god ! waaakeeee uppppp big bear!! winters sleep over !"
she pulled her tongue at me and started walking in front of meas she groaned .

" where 's Elena ? " I asked.
"She went to get cofee ."
we waited till she came and took our baggage and headed to our hotel .

Notes

please comment what you think about the start ...
even a " :) " can make my day :))))))))))))))))))

I will post the second chapter when i got 10 votes :DDD
by the way I will put characters photos on my next post !
bye tilll next time ;)

Comments

@diaspro16
No problem, its a great start :) I cant wait for the next update!!
Scar Scar
9/4/13
@Scarlett
thanks scarlet for saying <3 Im glad you liked it :))))))
diaspro16 diaspro16
9/4/13
Really nice start so far, I would have loved it to be longer though ;)
Only one thing i would suggest (Im not trying to criticize) would be to have capital letters. Purely because it makes it easier to read and looks better. Im honestly just tyring to help x
Anyway I cannot wait for the next chapter this is gonna be a really nice story! :)
Scar Scar
9/4/13