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One Direction Grown Ups

Chapter 15- Water Park part 3

Narrator POV
Over half the day was gone. They have gone on all of the water slides and now Louis, Emma, Andy, Cassidy, Zayn, Darcy, Harry, and Niall, were all in the highest tower of the park. It was an immeasurably long zip line descended down into the water which was swimming with what seemed like the entire town in it. Just the lads luck, The Wanted were there. "Dad how exactly do you do this?" Emma asked
"well um you just go on the zip line and let go so then you don't slam into the wall." The horrified look on Emma's face made his day.
"has that ever happened before?" Emma squeaked.
"sweetie I'm only joking" Louis chuckled and hugged her.
"come on Tomlinson, let the pros go first" Tom sneered
"hey hey hey, we're only here to have fun. Not to get this feud even worse than it already so lets just not start anything okay. I mean come on were with our families" Louis said.
"well I don't care, I'm trying to show. You. Up" Tom said taking a step towards Louis. "Go on Penny, show mini Tomlinson how it's done." Tom said patting his daughter on the back, urging her to go on. Penny had a huge adrenaline rush and grab the handle bars and jumped off the ledge and spun all the way down to the water and cannon balled in. The zip line came back and Emma, seeing how brave Penny was, got a huge wave of adrenaline, grabbed the handle bars and said.
"watch the dismantle" she said. Louis, knowing Emma did gymnastics watched anticipating what she was capable of. Tentatively everyone was on the balls of their feet, just waiting for the dismantle to happen. Emma swung her legs forward let go of the handles and did a double flip a twirl and landed in the water. The lads were cheering and everyone in the pool were too.
"that's it Max do it man" Tom said "upside down" he said again. Max nodded wildly and almost jumped off the ledge without the zip line. He pulled up and put his feet on the line and he was off. Everyone was cheering but the line was ending. He was flying down to the wooden fence in the outskirts of the pool. He wasn't getting off. All the kids turned around and suddenly.
CRASH
Max went through the fence and everyone went up to check on him. The zip line was closed and so was the water park.
One Direction and their families headed back to the cabin and watched some fire works out back. All the kids were in bed and Niall had his guitar and all the adults were singing around the camp fire.
all in all a great day.

Notes

Hey guys hope you all liked this chapter. Sorry it kinda sucks.
comment what you think or any suggestions.
also if you all think I should make a sequel.

Comments

@Abbyluvs1D
Yay! :D that's what I was going for
Lilywilliams Lilywilliams
10/4/13
Lol this reminds me of Grown Ups
Abbyluvs1D Abbyluvs1D
9/21/13
@Jackelyn_1D_dancer
Thanks :)
Lilywilliams Lilywilliams
9/10/13
I really like this story. I like the idea of their families and them being all together! Its a good story to read so please update! :) :) :)
I love it already! Please update! Its funny!