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Chapter 5 - coma

“Beep....beep....beep....beep....beep.”
The light is gone now and I seem to be in a hospital bed. “Renee?”
Niall says? I look up to see Niall sitting right by me sitting on my
bed. My head hurts a lot. “What happened?” I asked confused.
Niall looks at me with hurt in his eyes, “You were in a coma. When
I tried texting and calling you, I knew something was wrong. You
parents tried calling too. We knew something wasn't right. I called
your parents and went to your apartment. You were lying in bed. I fed
your dog because you were out. I tried waking you up, I thought you
were dead.” “How ling was out for?” I ask. “When I took you
here, the doctors said you were out for 3 days. It's been a week
since you got here. So almost 2 weeks.” Niall responds. If it
weren't for him, I would have been dead. I look at the tubes
connected to my arms and stomach. That's probably how they fed me
while I was in the coma.


*Niall's point of view

I sat there right beside her as she
thinks about everything. “You saved my life twice already in less
than a month.” Renee says. I sit there blushing and smiling. “How
can I ever repay you?” She whisper to Me. I looks down at her still
smiling and say, “Knowing that you're safe is good enough for me.”.
It may sound cheesy, but it's true. Renee makes me feel happy. I know
there is something about her that I just have to have. She makes me
feel like no other has ever.


*Renee's point of view

A few moments later, the boys come in.
“IS SHE OK?!!!?” Harry burst out. “Yeah, I'm fine.” I say
smiling. The boys are carrying 3 giant teddy bears each. Each bear
has 2 balloons tied around their necks. The boys set the bears and
balloons down on the floor and rush to me. “1..2..3..” Zayn says.
All the boys stand in front of my bed and start to sing. Don't know
what for. You turn your head when you walk through the doo-aor.”
The boys sing. After singing What Makes You Beautiful, Little Things,
and Stand Up, the doctor enters the room. “Say it to me doc!”
Louis yells out. At this we all start to laugh except for the doctor.
Louis doesn't give it up there thought. He keeps yelling weird,
witting, hospital jokes. After 10 minutes, the doctor looks like he's
about to kill Louis. “Time Out!” Liam says and points to the
corner. Niall can't help but to snicker a little as Louis pouts and
walks to the corner like a little puppy and sulks. “Well Renee is
well enough to leave the hospital. But comas can come back sometimes.
It's not a good idea to have her live by herself if she's under 18.”
The doctor finally says. “Wait! How old is she than!?” Harry
shouts out. All eyes in the room are on me. Niall already knows how
old I am, But I guess he didn't tell the boys. “I'm 15”. I say.
“Is there anybody you can stay with?” The doctor ask. I think of
people I could live with, but my closest relatives are in New York.
“I can move to New York with my aunt.” I say. Right before
anybody can say anything, Niall blurts “She can live with me!”

Notes

Hoped you guys liked it! I go back to school tomorrow so I will update the most I can. Try readying my new story. Passion. Read, vote, subscribe! Love ya

Comments

L.O.V.E IT!!! Update soon! :D
Gemma! Gemma!
9/16/13
Please update!!
Emmalvs1D Emmalvs1D
9/15/13
Even better than the last time!! That was amaZAYN, as always! Update when you ca, I will wait! :)
Gemma! Gemma!
9/13/13
Awesome! Update soon or when you can, I can wait! :)
Gemma! Gemma!
9/10/13
That's a shame, but it's good you're okay. :)
Take your time, and I will definitely NOT be unsubscribing to this story, I love it too much!! ;)
10/10, love it! xx
Gemma! Gemma!
9/8/13