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Kidnapped by 1D

Chapter 4

okay guys sorry if my chapters are justt pooppppp! because this is my first fanfic everr! but I'll try to improve...
your suscribsions and comments will encourage me!
thanks:)

jennifer's POV

I felt cold water droplets fall on my face ,that literally irritated me. I woke up and sat just to find my favourites, my future husbanddsss sitting on the end of the bed, " Jenn u little shitty, u ruined it , ecause of u we could'nt escape. and now see wht we r sitting with a group of twits" deepu yelled at me..."shut up u bitch, how can u be so selfish, i almost died and u have tension of escaping?" I yelled back, forgetting almost that 1D were sitting infront of me, i hated the way she was being uselfish, the way she insulted me!" OH seriously so now the kidnappers are more important right? U were and always will be a jerkk, I hate u,dont ever talk to me again" she yelled again. this time i got more angry " shut the fuck off , that is why no one ever can stay with u because u r just an arse hole, u ruin everything, u r a bloody selfish bitch, no one needs u, that's why he left u. just go awayy but let me atleast live my moment!" I yelled to the top of my lungs."okay u dont need me, then fine."she said tears falling down of her eyes and then she left. I felt bad for her, i hurt her, i didnt mean what i said to her. I reminded her of that jerk.oh how can u do this jenn howwwww? i regretted my words now.she will never forgive me neveerr. the 4 boys were staring at me with their jaws dropped and anger filled in their eyes.Niall was missing. "i am sorry" i opologized for being a twit infront of themm.and with that they all left....
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deepika POV
After Jenn fainted we took her to the room and sprinkled water on her face. i was damn angry at her. after the hurtfull words she said to me, i ran and ran,found no place to go in so just ran upwards and went into a bedroom., and closed it back, and ignored who was following me. i ran and jumped into the bed, tears still falling from my eyes.how she do that to me, why did she do that to me?IT HURTS i thought until the door opened a blonde hair boy wearing red polo shirt with red supras enterred my room. he looked cute. i was so sad to think about him. he came and without saying a thing he hugged me, i felt confused but than i hugged him back, because i needed someone to comfort me. after 2 min of hugging i pulled off. " dont cry love,i know she was being mean" he said with his angel voice wiping my tears with his thumb. his touch gave me a electric current type of. i loved it when he touched me.. ughhh what r u thinking, dont think that, he is just a kidnapped."comeon love" he snapped me out of my thoughts by holding my hand and dragging me down.


Notes

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Comments

@EmmeeStyles
Thanku so much for liking the story but I can't continue it bcz my gmail is not working..
Sorry




@Twerk_Harrehh
@EmmeeStyles
@One direction is perfection.

I am really sorry guys:( My gmail is not working so I can't continue this story more! this is my new account!
and thnx for the support.........
@EmmeeStyles

What the hell to you Emmee? do u like stalk what I do? give me back my laptop :/
Twerk_Harrehh Twerk_Harrehh
8/31/13
@Twerk_Harrehh

Noelle, what the hell?

-Emmee
HazzasGurl360 HazzasGurl360
8/31/13
Excellent story and storyline! But I would just like to say, before you update, type it out onto a Word Document, so that you have no spelling mistakes. :) oh and when people are talking, present it like this:
"Hey Niall!" I said
"Hey Deepika" Niall replied
yea, you know, making a new paragraph so that it is more easy for your fellow readers to read :)
Once again, plz don't feel bad about my comment, I just wanna help <3
-Emmee x
HazzasGurl360 HazzasGurl360
8/31/13