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Please Dont Say You Love Me

What have you done?!

Louis' POV
I run into the ladies toilets to see Mia on the floor out cold, Aaron with a bloody knife in his hand and Charlie looking all smug.
"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!" I yell running to Mia. Niall and El just behind me.
"MIA?!" Niall yells giving her a little shake trying to wake her up.
"El go get help NOW!" I yell. I stand up and go over to Aaron.
"What did you do?!" I shout right in his face
"What she wouldnt shut up so I made her, now im leaving" he says
"No you aint! You are staying right here until the police come!" I shout
"No mate im really not!" He snaps back. he punches me in the face and runs out. that bastard.
I look over at Niall, Hes sitting on the floor with Mia in his arms, tear after tear spilling out over his cheek. I sit beside him and stroke Mia's Pale cheek.
If only I had come in sooner!
If only we hadn't let her go here alone!
If only El had gone with her.
All these If's keep playing in my mind. This is all my fault. If I didn't ask them to come with us none of this would have happened. now I'm sitting on the floor in the ladies bathroom with My best friend lying here dying and there's nothing I can do.
The sound of sirens full the room as the paramedics run in and see to Mia.
"Is she going to be ok?!" I ask the nurse who is now attending to Mia.
"We need to get her to the hospital!" She shouts to one of the other nurses.
"IS SHE GOING TO BE OK?!" I yell at the nurse
"Look Sir you have to keep calm we are doing all we can for her!" She replies calmly
They take Mia out on a stretcher and the police take Aaron and Charlie down to the station.
I walk into the back of the ambulance with Niall.
"Are you family?" The nurse asks
"No but im coming anyway, Im her bestfriend were practically family and this is her Boyfriend" I snap
The drive to the Hospital is fast, when we get out she is taken away the the ICU, me and Niall are lift waiting in the waiting, room.
An hour passes and still no news, I'm starting to get impatient, but just then a nurse walk in.
"You here for Mia?" She asks softly.
"Yes!" I Stand to my feet as soon as I hear her name
"Follow me." she says taking us into Mia's room.
"Mia!" I run up to her but she doesnt reply.
"Im sorry, we did all we can.." She says
"What do you mean?!" I shout
"She's in a coma."
As the Last words left her mouth my heart sank. Not Mia please Not Mia. I cant lose her. not now, not ever! I feel my whole work crashing down around me.

Notes

Hey guys, sorry to say but im going away until friday its only 3 days but i wont have internet! so i wont be able to update! I am taking my laptop so I will write chapters for you and post them when i get back! Hope you like it! love yous! dont forget to vote, comment and subscribe! :)xox

Comments

@Carissa
Updated :)
CrazyMofos1D CrazyMofos1D
10/24/13
I love this story :P
Carissaaa Carissaaa
10/22/13
@love_narry
will try update today
CrazyMofos1D CrazyMofos1D
10/22/13
omfg update plz plz plz I love this story and its really getting juicy now !!;p hehe cx ! carry on with this story ?
love_narry love_narry
10/18/13
Damn.....so they both cheated on each other!! WTF gunna happen now??
queen.lizzy queen.lizzy
10/6/13