Login with:

Facebook

Twitter

Tumblr

Google

Yahoo

Aol.

Mibba

Your info will not be visible on the site. After logging in for the first time you'll be able to choose your display name.

Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 52

In The Apartment.

Next Morning


Eleanor's P.O.V

"Shit..." I hear someone say, I moan and shift my body on my side. My eyes still closed I can already feel that today isn't going to be a good day.

"Why is it so fucking dark in here.." I hear a girl like voice say.

Who's that? It isn't Dude of course..

-Flashback-

Eleanor's P.O.V

"..Now I don't know what she has in store for you.." Dude says.

-Flashback Ends-


Eleanor's P.O.V

I take my time carefully opening my eyelids to see the same dim light room. I lightly move my head, careful to not make a sound and see a girl..bending down about my age with blonde hair. Chills run down my spine.

She hums a light tune and looks in her..purse? I study her with my eyes moving over and over her leans yet somewhat plump body. Is this red coat? And where the hell is Dude..she's wearing a dress with ugly print, a black top and wedges.

I try to look away because her bum is in my face almost making me mad. So I close my eyes but the second I do I hear.

"Oh..and look who's up." I hear a fake teacher-like voice say

I flutter my eyes open and look up to see a plastic frightening mask. My heart jerks. Come on El, don't be a pussy. I sit up on my knees and look up at her. Bitch. Her face is unrecognizable which sucks for me. Obviously this is red coat.

"Aren't you going to say good morning." she spats, I can't even tell who she is by her voice.

I mentally roll my eyes but manage to say quietly, "Good morning.."

I almost jump out of my skin..she's wearing a mask..with a fake smile..I can't even see her eyes!

She chuckles, "Good morning to you too Eleanor." she cheers whilst clapping her hands. Why the hell is she so happy?

I'm just gonna go right to the point and ask her, "Why am I here..and who are you?" I ask a bit scared of her reaction.

She leans on one foot and sighs..she's a bit over weight to be honest but still a good size.

"You're here because I want you to be and...you know me." she simply says.

"I know you're red coat." I add glaring at her.

Her smile shows through the plastic on her face. "...You're smart like everyone says you are..well then call me red coat." she says like it's no big deal.

My stomach grumbles..boy am I hungry. I look at her and she just stares at me with her arms folded...weirdo.

"C-can I have something to eat." I say..I don't even ask. Why should I? The fucker's holding me hostage.

"Um..no, I think you're fine." she says whilst walking back to her purse. She picks it up and looks in it taking out a pack of gum.

"But..I'm hungry." I whine

She quickly turn her head, "I give no fuck in the world. Now would you shut up..." she snaps

I furrow my eyebrows and look out the window...hm, I didn't notice that last night. But it's boarded up anyways.

I watch as she puts the light pink colored gum in her mouth. She then shuts her mouth close and smiles at me. Bitch much.

I wonder what she wants for me..I mean I barely have anything that anyone would want. Speaking of anyone..Oh my God Alison and Hannah! They're probably worried sick about me...I hope they call the police or something so I can get the hell out of hear.

I look around and see a hallway.

"Want to clean up and wash your face?" she asks.

Oh now she wants to treat me like an actual human being? I nod slowly and look down at the hard floor. Red coat walks over to me and begins to untie my wrist. Fucking finally.

"....Don't even thinkabout fighting your way out of here." she warns.

Why would I? The door's already fucking locked. She unties both of my hands and I touch the red marks that they caused on my irritated itchy skin. Ugh.

"Come on bitch, I don't have all day." she spats. I get up and brush my hands over the train of my dress because of the wrinkles but of course it doesn't help.

My heels click and clack on the cement floor as I follow her down the dark hallway. She puts the light on and lights up the bathroom. It's okay..not nice but I guess it would be grand for a homeless guy but still.

I walk in and look around at the rusty tub with cracks.

"Here!" I flinch as I see something thrown at me from the corner of my eye. I look down to see a green toothbrush.

Just my luck huh. I look up in the mirror and almost jump as I see my face. I have dry crusty paint on the side of my face, my eyeliner is dried up with my red lipstick smeared across my lips caused by my terrible kidnap.

"Hurry back." she warns and I hear her heels walk further away from me. Down the hall.

I close the door and let my tears fall. Looking at my beautiful dress I turn the water on. Look at me..I'm useless at this point. I don't even understand why the fuck I'm here! All red coat does is stare at me anyways.

I bend down and let the water pour on my hands...Fuck! It's cold! I turn only hot on and wait...no hot water? Ugh, shit. I still bend down and let the cold water wash my face off. I look up and smile but stop , because hell it doesn't help.

I then take my toothbrush and put the toothpaste on it and brush my top, bottom, back and tongue. The minty flavor goes down my throat by accident.

I make a face..but then again I don't know how long it will be till I have my next meal. God Eleanor you're gross I know but whatever. I squeeze the tube of toothpaste and swallow some slowly even with the taste be too minty. I do this for about four times before feeling..the least bit of energy.

"I told you to hurry up you fucker!" I hear her yell

I roll my eyes and sigh, "I'm coming!" I yell back.

Fuck El...bad idea. I hear heels coming down the hall. Before I know it the bathroom door slams open. I quickly cut off the running faucet and hold the toothpaste.

"Did you fucking just yell at me?" her voice calmly says.

Awwww shit boy, "I-I'm sorry.." I say quietly.

If this bitch can cut car breaks, beat the shit out of me, and stalk me.

"I said..did you just fucking yell at me?! " She yells so loud that I close my eyes with the ring of my ears.

I feel her grab my hair and pull me down the hallway behind her.

Um, hell no. I put my hands on her's trying to get them fucking off, "L-let go!" I yell

She throws me on the floor and gets on her knees to re-tie me to the wall. I furrow my brow and watch her.

Once she's done she gets up and walks to the kitchen opening cabinets.

"I told you to fucking listen to me. I don't know if you understand that you're under my rules now..slut" she says to herself.

I'm the slut? Um clap,clap but honey I'm not the fat one. She returns with a pocket knife in had.

"Don't you fucking dare!" I yell

"This is what you get for yelling at me..whore." with that she grabs my wrist, I pull her by the hair trying to fight her but I feel a slit cut on my wrist.

"I hate you!" I yell, why cut me for yelling? This bitch must be...mental.

"...I don't think you've learned your lesson." I glare at her.

Suddenly I hear keys and a door unlock. Dude? All of sudden I feel a wipe on my head and a hard slap that causes me to fully lay down on the cement floor on my side.

Red coat laughs, "..See I warned you. And now look what I've done to your pretty little face..bitch." she then shows me my reflection in her pocket mirror.

Tears falls down my tears as I study my bruised face..she'd slit my forehead..not too deep but she's done good with my blood trickling down my forehead. The pain then starts to come in and I feel a burn similar to the one on my wrist.

"Shit.." I curse to myself. So low that even she can't hear.

The bitch slit my face..right above my forehead. My stomach grumbles once again and I force myself to sit up. Red coat throws the mirror at me, hitting my nose that makes it sting.

"I'm human you know.." I say to her.

She stares at me for a minute and swiftly walks to the door opening it.

"Great, you're here!" she sounds excited. I try to see who it is but no use...I'm tied up and all.

She stops talking so..I guess the other person is talking? I can't even hear him/her.

"Wait, let me just get the stuff ready. She's gonna be fucking surprised huh." Her annoying laugh rings in my ear.

Who is this animal? And why does she hate me so much? It can't be a guy obviously I know that by now...the only girl that I can think of that actually may have something against me is..my mom? But she isn't that big either.

-Flashback-

I look at Becka as she rushes over to Evan who's badly injured. She looks slutty of course and is chewing her gum as usual.

-Flashback Ends-

Eleanor's P.O.V

Oh my fucking God! It's Becka?! ....It all makes sense, Evan flirting with me and her getting mad, Louis fighting Evan and me being Evan's ex are somewhat ways for her to hate me. I look back at the hallway with my heart racing.

What if Evan's out there? Then again Becka is a little overweight..Bitch. It all adds up..but why hold me fucking hostage?

I look up abruptly to see Becka walking back with a stand like object into the room and taking out a nice camera. She sets in on the black stand that she brought and tilts her head at me. I just know that her fake as smile is behind that thin plate of plastic.

"..You're pretty." she says, her voice muzzled due to the mask. She giggles and shifts the mask so that she can speak better.

"You and I are going to have a little bit of fun right now..I think I'll most likely enjoy it though.." she says walking towards me.

Bitch, I have person space. Just. Like. You. Now...you are in my fucking bubble so you might as well removed yourself slut.

I look up, "Shh.." is all she says. Shh? Shh?! Becka then touches my hair and twirls it around. My stomach growls.

She fakes gasps and puts her hand in front of her mouth.."Someone's hungry.." she sings

I roll my eyes but she doesn't sees and walks back into the hallway leaving me once again alone.

"Come on..we need to hurry this up people may actually be looking for her." she whispers in a hurry voice.

Who's she talking to? And why the hell is there a camera in front of me...whatever it's for, I'm not saying shit. And I mean it.

I hope someone finds me and soon, because I don't know what the hell is next.

Notes

Hey guys, I hope you liked it!

Omg who's at the door?! And omg it's Becka!

Erm, well I have no friends. I've been dumped by my best friend and ignored..help on any ideas or anyone wanna be my friend? Especially if you live in Minnesota..I'm lonely, bored and dumped for another girl so anyways yeah! Message me and update tomorrow! Much Love-Sammie Xx

P.S. I hope you like the new cover! And my 14th Birthday is October 18th! I'm going to Mall of America with friends and if you become my friend within these few days you can come! Lmfao so yeah. Bye #TurnUpLittleRedCoats!

Awkward moment when you're teacher dresses better than you..http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ma64r3ZHIJ1rumr86o2_500.gif

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

Yeezy Yeezy
3/21/15

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/30/14

Update


Mrs_Tommo53 Mrs_Tommo53
7/25/14