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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 4

Later That Night

Eleanor's P.O.V

I got dressed in some skinny jeans and a cute over top vest like thing that I bought from the mall earlier today.

"So, how are things with you and Louis?" Hannah asked me while she was putting her mascara on.

"Fine, we've gotten closer" I said smiling and curling my hair. It wasn't till ten-forty when we were all dressed. We took Nelly's car because Hannah's was out of gas and she was working tomorrow so she actually needed the car.

Five Minutes Later

Eleanor's P.O.V

We got down from the car and walked in line waiting our turn. I looked around and saw some stoners smoking cigarettes, slutty girls and some guys thinking they were the shit walking in line behind us. Before I knew it was our turn and I showed the guy my I.D. and headed in. The music blaring and people dancing and drinking. Nelly pointed across the room, and I followed to where she was pointing to. I saw Zayn waving and Harry dancing with a slutty blonde. We walked over and I sat by Zayn.

"Hey, glad you made it" he said before taking another drink of beer.

I smiled, "Sorry it takes us girls for-ever to get ready" he nodded.

"Sorry Louis couldn't make it, he stayed to handle the band's paper work."

"It's fine I totally understand."

Then a red headed girl came up to me "Would you like anything to drink?" I don't drink though so

I guess a cranberry juice would do.

I looked up "Um a simple cranberry juice will do"

"Coming right up" and she walked away

Zayn looked at me... "You don't drink El?"

"No, I don't, see my mom used to be an alcoholic so I have have a seventy-five percent chance of becoming one to so I choose to limit my options"

He nodded "Well do you still know how to have fun?"

I giggled "Of course" I said shaking my hips.

Zayn grabbed my hand and took me to the dance floor. All of a sudden 'Pour It Up' came on and everyone went crazy with girl grinding on the guys behind then. Following along I did the same with Zayn. I could feel his length getting harder by the second... was I wrong? I mean he's Louis friend. I don't care anymore,tonight I'm going to have fun.

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

Yeezy Yeezy
3/21/15

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Bipolar Bipolar
3/21/15

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.

LTStyles92 LTStyles92
7/30/14

Update


Mrs_Tommo53 Mrs_Tommo53
7/25/14